I'm going to be completely honest here: this sounds like someone experimenting with new plugins and sound manipulators for the first time. This was difficult to listen to; it was like listening to subtle variations of one simple idea for five minutes. I wanted to hear melodic development, new instruments (besides for background synths), more extreme modulations, etc. and I especially wanted to hear a change in rhythm. The mix is clear, but it's also very flat. You could have panned the drums more to make the song sound more dynamic. You also could have used panning automations, which would sound beautiful with the delay effects on the drums.
This could be nice to listen to as background music, whether it's in an animation, game, or just in another tab. So I don't think it's that bad.
With that said, I do like your instrument choices, as well as the effects.